JokerGem
  Junior Editor

I would suggest to you: joining the poetry portion of this site to get feedback and support for this type of writing....most likely it will be taken down from the grammar page as it is not applicable here....

Splendid!

Real quick, something l've been wondering about that it seems may have been overlooked: once a poem has been submitted, if you edit the title or content in any way, it seems the site deletes the poem's genre selections and does not allow them to be restored or denoted again going forward—which is discouraging...
Could there be a way to fix, or get around this circumstance? more »

Well-constructed and hopeful theme....worthy enough to me~

If this is supposed to be Angelina Jolie's son then the birth info is incorrect .

Real quick, something l've been wondering about that it seems may have been overlooked: once a poem has been submitted, if you edit the title or content in any way, it seems the site deletes the poem's genre selections and does not allow them to be restored or denoted again going forward—which is discouraging...
Could there be a way to fix, or get around this circumstance? more »

Thanks a million
– hearing that is most appreciated! Yes, vocab-wise l really went for it in this one....

Absolutely, you have my permission! It reads correctly now...thanks for being receptive my correction! Keep up your informative content--
Jeffrey~

Touché

Teri, this was informative and on-point except, l think your wording for the football reference of 'blindside' was confusing and perhaps could use an edit. "Cannot see the football being thrown from that side?" Did you mean the linemen on that side are also blind to the quarterback? --Because l think the phrase solely describes the quarterback's inability to see the rush from that side when in passing mode. more »

I must say there is something here...a style, a flair, and an approach l admire. I nearly voted for this now l regret l didn't.

I enjoyed this despite the subject not necessarily being something enjoyable. Well written work~

I was baited to check out this article...LoL. ;-)

This is quite profound. Maybe too deep to follow without rereading as you go but the message permeates. Awesome word selection and the closing stanza is just terrific! This is definitely poetry for advanced players. more »

Glad you liked it. I write about this particular topic and viewpoint quite frequently, I just wonder how many more are out there who're fed up with a 'medical' field that's essentially tampering with us more than the reasons we seek it out for. I'm to the point I consider it snake oil for what it's worth. more »